Every story has its right shape. 

Every story has its right place. 

Let me help you find both.

I offer fast, efficient, no frills development.

Story development is as much about who writes as it is about who the story is for.

My goal is your goal: Get to a story that engages your audience, as fast as possible.

From Aristotle to Linda Seger, many great and wise story consultants have found ways to nudge you along the road towards THE END.

No need to reinvent the wheel: I use their knowledge. But instead of throwing entire books at you I will give you only what you need, when you need it from this treasure trove of wisdom.

Other consultants help you to find your roots, to question your subconscious, to listen to your inner voice. And it’s okay if you need that. But if it is important to you to get your story in shape in order to bring it out there and get results, try totellastory and save yourself the detour through the depths of your soul.

My services include:

  • Initial assessment of screenplay, pilot script or series concept
  • Consultation packages (Skype or FaceTime (30 min/week)
  • Coaching and preparing for pitches and presentations, 
  • Strategizing in building relationships with US studios, production companies, buyers, agencies and management companies.

​Basic package:

  • Detailed notes
  • Analysis of Character, Plot, Structure, Dialogue, and Concept Analysis
  • One 1:1 consultation (30 min)
  • 6 emails with assignments, concrete steps for further development


Full package:

  • Basic package plus…
  • 2-3 page synopsis to reveal your structural choices
  • Market analysis and recommendations 
  • Two 1:1 consultations (2 x 30 min.)
  • Logline for pitching
  • 12 emails with assignments, steps for further development, feedback on revised outline
  • Next two steps to sell your script 


Premium package:

  • Full package plus…
  • In PDF notes throughout your script
  • Detailed competitor analysis: 
    • Your outline against the perfect outline in your genre
    • Your first page against the perfect first page in our genre
  • Specific suggestions for a redraft of your script
  • 18 emails with assignments, steps for further development, feedback on revised script
  • Next four steps to sell your script 


Please get in touch for additional services such as:

  • Industry Coverage including professional one-sheet summary, assessment of tone, themes, plot, and characters.
  • Consulting and Script Doctoring $250.00/day or $2000.00/week (includes Premium package services + up one 1:1 consultation for each two full days + follow-up notes on revised draft)

Get in touch to learn how we will help you

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